It's really great to see how she combines the porn with the plot and the characters.
Maybe something on the titel.
I picked "New Horizon" because it's the name of the production company in the fic and it was the first time I ever read slash. so it was kind of a 'new horizon' for me as well.
Yeah.. that might be it. If you have any questions, feel free to mail me.
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